In this grand pattern of things you actually receive a B+ for hard work. Where you actually lost everybody was in all the facts. You know, they say, details make or break the argument.. And it could not be much more true here. Having said that, permit me say to you just what did work. The article (parts of it) is certainly really powerful and that is possibly why I am taking an effort in order to opine. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. 2nd, despite the fact that I can notice a leaps in reasoning you make, I am not necessarily certain of how you appear to connect your ideas which in turn produce the actual conclusion. For the moment I will, no doubt subscribe to your issue but hope in the future you connect the dots better.